Score: 10

"My eyes have never seen anything this amazing..."

submission: The Drunken Spartan

date: October 18, 2009

EVER.

It's sinply the best 'Sparta' thing I've ever seen. 1000000000/10

Score: 10

"5 Stars..."

submission: Tree Clock Beats Puppies

date: September 18, 2009

Just for that beastly credits song.

Score: 10

"Awesome..."

submission: War, Snow and Fire

date: August 18, 2009

Everything in this movie was awesome, from the story to the brilliant artwork as well as the well-themed music. I also like the characteristics of the characters, like the girl's love for the dragon and her father's obsession with war.

Great Job!!! 5/5 10/10!

Score: 8

"Good Game..."

submission: Gradient Man Demo

date: July 3, 2009

But, yeah, it's definitly a piece of work.

I would recommend tightning the movement of Gridient Man, as the controls for him seem too loosey-goosey to actually get a really high score. Also, you really no to fix the whole 'refresh-replay' thing, but thats okay for a demo, and, besides, you guys are probably working on it, anyway.

Other than that I found no other glitches and it was a relatively fun game.

Good job!!! 4/5 8/10

But keep working on it!! I want the complete version NOW!!! XP

Score: 10

"Awesome Sphgetti-Western-like flick..."

submission: The Ballad of CrippleKane

date: July 3, 2009

Great 70's-ish animation, some classy tunes, and a some badass characters make this an instant Newgrounds classic!

Great Job!

5/5 10/10

Just Epic man, really.

Score: 9

"I heard there are marketing openings at Doritos..."

submission: Make Snacks not War

date: May 15, 2009

You might want to join. This amatuer flick is 50 times better than the crap the show on LIVE TV.

But very cute and clever, the same. Made me chuckle!

9/10

Score: 4

"Huh..."

submission: The Flash Button

date: May 15, 2009

BREAKDOWN
The voicing felt off, there appeared to be no constructive plot, and the finger was frankly boring. The NarWHALE definetly helped your score, as it was a funny and random idea that made me chuckle a bit. Your stroke is okay, but defininitly nothing special.

HOW YOU CAN IMPROVE FOR NEXT TIME
I would recommend recording your voice first, because then you can work with it and take the excerpts that work best with your animation. As for the plot, it doesn't HAVE to be some big extravagenza, but at least not make it so plodding and slow. Also, make sure your characters are interesting and have desirable relations. A crying finger, I'm sorry, just doesn't really get the job done. (But a button with SWAG and a NarWHALE being a NarWHALE can.) As for your stroke, all I can say is...PRACTICE! PRACTICE!! PRACTICE!!!! You may not improve, but it will AT LEAST make things easier on you for next time.

CONCLUSION
You have potential, but, unfortunately, your movie does not. 4/10.

Score: 8

"Collab? Me thinks more of a collage..."

submission: Altered Reality

date: May 15, 2009

...As in it was very well-put together, or, at least, more so than your typical collab.

Even though I'm sure folks have said this beforehand, I think that was an awesome collab. It moved swiftly, but not too much. It featured all sort of different art styles and ideas, but stayed connected to the main theme through and through. It was Action-Packed, Well-themed, expressive, explosive...Any faults?

Well, I personally disliked the main theme song's part were the semi-lyrics were said. It was IMO a little suggesting, and that I don't like.

Other than that it was Really Good! Two thumbs up! Take a bow for splendid artwork, design, and delegation!

Score: 9

"Splendid..."

submission: The Ignored Monster

date: May 15, 2009

And to think I thought I had forgotten my childhood...

Aww, now that was very cute. It indeed brought a smile to my face at the happy ending. But what I really liked was the child-like simplicity of it all. I mean, this monster is not very startling to begin with, but, in an almost odd sort of way, we fall in love with him, loving his sad state which is caused by his inability to scare the least of anybody. In the end the simplest, most basic, and most primitive moral of all is made, which brings joy to our minds, as the monster's odd predicament is solved.

In addition to that, what REALLY made it feel child-like (And trust me I mean that in a GOOD way) were both the cranyons (and their simplestic drawings - oh, the nostalgia of it all!) and the beautiful, toy-like music.

In the end, this is a great work of art, composed by an aurthur who he himself brings us back to a place where we all have been - childhood.

Score: 8

"A Brilliant Visual Joke!"

submission: It's a Sign!

date: February 13, 2009

I really like how it was animated - not too sketchy (but not entirely the best, either). I also loved the visual joke of having the R + R sign, how Angry Face falls in love with it, and then, at the perfect moment, BOOM! Angry Face gets hit by the train. The music was brilliantly used, as well. I just had a few problems with it: 1) The jokes were obvious and you could see them coming. and 2) It was a bit short (but with this kind of plot, it's fine).

In all, good humor (although it was a tad obvious), good music, and, overall, a good Valentine's Day flash

Nice Work!