Funny as heck. I kind of hate that I know all these types of dudes irl lol.
Funny as heck. I kind of hate that I know all these types of dudes irl lol.
Very funny.
My eyes have never seen anything this amazing...
EVER.
It's sinply the best 'Sparta' thing I've ever seen. 1000000000/10
Awesome...
Everything in this movie was awesome, from the story to the brilliant artwork as well as the well-themed music. I also like the characteristics of the characters, like the girl's love for the dragon and her father's obsession with war.
Great Job!!! 5/5 10/10!
Awesome Sphgetti-Western-like flick...
Great 70's-ish animation, some classy tunes, and a some badass characters make this an instant Newgrounds classic!
Great Job!
5/5 10/10
Just Epic man, really.
I heard there are marketing openings at Doritos...
You might want to join. This amatuer flick is 50 times better than the crap the show on LIVE TV.
But very cute and clever, the same. Made me chuckle!
9/10
Huh...
BREAKDOWN
The voicing felt off, there appeared to be no constructive plot, and the finger was frankly boring. The NarWHALE definetly helped your score, as it was a funny and random idea that made me chuckle a bit. Your stroke is okay, but defininitly nothing special.
HOW YOU CAN IMPROVE FOR NEXT TIME
I would recommend recording your voice first, because then you can work with it and take the excerpts that work best with your animation. As for the plot, it doesn't HAVE to be some big extravagenza, but at least not make it so plodding and slow. Also, make sure your characters are interesting and have desirable relations. A crying finger, I'm sorry, just doesn't really get the job done. (But a button with SWAG and a NarWHALE being a NarWHALE can.) As for your stroke, all I can say is...PRACTICE! PRACTICE!! PRACTICE!!!! You may not improve, but it will AT LEAST make things easier on you for next time.
CONCLUSION
You have potential, but, unfortunately, your movie does not. 4/10.
Collab? Me thinks more of a collage...
...As in it was very well-put together, or, at least, more so than your typical collab.
Even though I'm sure folks have said this beforehand, I think that was an awesome collab. It moved swiftly, but not too much. It featured all sort of different art styles and ideas, but stayed connected to the main theme through and through. It was Action-Packed, Well-themed, expressive, explosive...Any faults?
Well, I personally disliked the main theme song's part were the semi-lyrics were said. It was IMO a little suggesting, and that I don't like.
Other than that it was Really Good! Two thumbs up! Take a bow for splendid artwork, design, and delegation!
Splendid...
And to think I thought I had forgotten my childhood...
Aww, now that was very cute. It indeed brought a smile to my face at the happy ending. But what I really liked was the child-like simplicity of it all. I mean, this monster is not very startling to begin with, but, in an almost odd sort of way, we fall in love with him, loving his sad state which is caused by his inability to scare the least of anybody. In the end the simplest, most basic, and most primitive moral of all is made, which brings joy to our minds, as the monster's odd predicament is solved.
In addition to that, what REALLY made it feel child-like (And trust me I mean that in a GOOD way) were both the cranyons (and their simplestic drawings - oh, the nostalgia of it all!) and the beautiful, toy-like music.
In the end, this is a great work of art, composed by an aurthur who he himself brings us back to a place where we all have been - childhood.
Wow, that was wonderfully well put. Thank you, I really appreciate your understanding of my piece.
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